Last "The Little Sorceress" Post for awhile!

Yep, last one for awhile We are going to play a game... :D The snippet game! I am going to post two snippets, you pick which one you like better and post the comment or email me and I will post the comment for you. :)

1. "When morning came Zahara had fallen asleep by the creek and accidentally fallen in for a cold and unexpected morning bath it quickly washed away all the mud that was on her. Zahara stood wiping her eyes “Ugh...” She shivered slightly and walked back to the others. Niiri, Bliqui, and Kirli were asleep outside the fort so when Zahara walked by she nearly stepped on Niiri's hand. Zahara entered the fort and the silence made her uneasy. “I've been waiting for you, Princess Zahara.” A man said and Zahara's eyes widened at the voice “yequin?!” the man chuckled “Don't you want to know who killed your mother? Or are you just going to call your pathetic friends?” He said
“I know what killed her, A sickness, even though you wish you did!” Zahara spat at him and he chuckled “And just who do you think caused that sickness?” yequin said to a terrified Zahara “You... You killed her?!” she cried waking up Bliqui who tried to enter but Yequin had somehow blocked the door so he couldn't get in. “Not only did I kill her, I have something else you have lost, something that you hurt and broke, something... That doesn't believe you live anymore.” Yequin said “But enough talking.” He whispered something and summoned a dark minion who knocked Zahara unconscious"

Next one will be here in a moment... Blogger isn't liking me.